Strong and silent in character and mind
Loving and steadfast Alex and Natalie draw the line
making all their friends truly blessed
Showing truth far beyond words
Leaving this shoot undoubtedly defined
Strong and silent in heart and mind loving and steadfast, they draw the line making all their friends truly blessed far beyond what words could express leaving this shoot wholly defined
Like the original verse, Wade. Tis always helpful to find editors though. I loved the Creative Writing class with Dr. Johnny Wink. Plenty of opportunities to grow in our ability to express ourselves.
Strong and silent in heart and mind
ReplyDeleteloving and steadfast, they draw the line
making all their friends truly blessed
far beyond what words could express
leaving this shoot wholly defined
Hope this is helpful.
Like the original verse, Wade. Tis always helpful to find editors though. I loved the Creative Writing class with Dr. Johnny Wink. Plenty of opportunities to grow in our ability to express ourselves.
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